She’s forever going to have the reputation of “the character who made out with the NPC”

  • Ahdok@ttrpg.networkOP
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    11 months ago

    In my script, I had another of the characters saying “wise choice” from off camera in panel 5, but I cut it for space and clarity.

    It makes the dialogue flow more entertaining, but I couldn’t squeeze it in with visual coherence.